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.Casun.

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« April 17, 2012, 10:06:09 PM » #2176
mg_smash_ocean_rev2
Ocean Themed, really simple for now, i will add detail in the future, fine tuned to be quick with rounds.
I may do work on my other map, or make another new one. Please comment.

rev1: fixed problem with forces on boxes, added more platforms
rev2: added more variation to platforms, fixed non physbox corner platforms, perfected boxes





Edit: rev2 released

« Last Edit: April 17, 2012, 10:32:12 PM by .Casun. »

Jaythorpe

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« April 17, 2012, 10:47:05 PM » #2178
The map looks rushed and lacking detail
With the copied and pasted Block spawners

Try changing the shape of the platforms too many maps just have rectangles

Try and make the map as original as possible


« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 10:25:32 AM by Jaythorpe »

Fro Dough

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« April 18, 2012, 11:08:13 AM » #2189
What Jaythorpe said, but with some additions
- The textures at the bottom appear to be rushed, this takes away from the value of the map as a whole. Make them better.
-There is no localised spawn point it would appear. It would be better if you were to make some form of centeral alcove from which people spawned each time so that you can get an idea of where you are. Where you spawn now seems to distant.
- Do somthing other than quadrilaterals, like a hexagon maybe or a triangle. Rectangles and squares get boring.
I didnt break it the lava did! Honest!
I also made the 3000th post. Anyone who says otherwise will be....puynished.

Willdy

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« April 18, 2012, 11:18:06 AM » #2190
Can you guys specify which version you looked at?

I was considering to check this out when I can but I don't know if its worth it following the feedback already given.

Jaythorpe

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« April 18, 2012, 01:02:46 PM » #2194
rev2

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